Proposal Feedback

I had some good feedback from Colin. I have a few changes to make, and plan to add a bit more within the literature review. I will make these changes closer to the deadline, and continuing concept one for the bully and victim characters up till the 10th of december. I'm going to try have a meeting with Robin and John next week, I am concerned however, that there is going to be train and bus disruptions for days to come yet... and am still pretty much snowed in from getting to the main road. I will keep in touch by email.